Searria H.

Yay! Edited. Getting much better, but I still have a few nit-picks. :D First of all, are Neeco, and Neko pronounced the same? I think I know how to pronounce ...

OOO! Dramatic! The snake is really good, and I don't have anything to say about that. The back leg that we can see looks sort of disconnected. I would make ...

Okay. I think I can help you with the tail. The first little tuft is too tall and not connected enough to the rest of the tail. The second tuft ...

Very cute. For some reason, I would like the tail to curl around it's hind leg. I don't know. The head is fantastic! The hind leg is a little weird. ...

Okay, Aloe made me a little confused. I thought your main Character was a girl! Thanks for clearing that up Vamp. Allrighty! Very interesting. The whole cat neko think makes ...

Very nice! I only have a few comments. 1. I think the flames need to have more levels than just the pink and orange since they're sort of big. 2. ...

Okay. This is kind of creepy. I like it when things have pupils. :lol: The tail stops a little bluntly for me. Maybe add some more tufts to it or ...

Cute. You draw a little bit like a friend of mine. I think I know what's wrong with the nose. The top line of the triangle is tilted downward a ...

umm..Squall? She was using personification. It's a type of figurative language. :D -Sea-

Wow. Everyone looks great. Well, someone (Chirantha) *cough* has been urging me to post a picture of myself, so...yeah. I'm not very pretty. Oh, and I don't usually look this ...

Hmm. Slightly confusing, but intriguing! Terribly sorry that I haven't reviewed this until know, but school has been theiving all of my spare time. The poem at the beginning was ...

*shutters* This was kinda intense. As Demeter said, her thoughts and flashbacks should be in italics, especially her first thought, Freedom is not what I thought it would be because ...

Wow. You must have been really bored. The detail is good and the different colour scales must have taken forever! The green patch on the back of his head look ...

Okay. WHO IS NICK JONAS???? Am I just that out of touch with the world? :lol: Sould I feel totally horrible for not knowing him? Well, since I don't know ...

This was good, although not my absolute favorite of your pieces. I'm not a big fan of pastels because they always leave white spots. It's a shame that you couldn't ...